Feedback To The Director
while playing Rosalind in “As You Like It”
by William Conelly
Life’s third of seven stages
is a breathless ode
to mortal coupling—
or so Arden’s recluse
philosopher declares,
if someone shops for truth
among his cutting wares.
A young, befuddled love
portends not lifelong joy,
but scripted foolishness—
he claims—carved in this oak,
hung from that bush or tree—
delusion played for chance,
while fondly naming me.
Our courtyard jester claims
love is mere witty bait
to copulation. Quips
aside though, he can’t brook
lust’s carnal slit or shove:
he wants a shepherdess
he can be certain of.
Your Rosalind’s the sun
around which others seek
both light and magical
conjunction. Playing love
for every double meaning,
she’s both youth and girl
until—in contravening—
she’s woman to the core.
Love is madness, she’ll tell
her lover from disguise,
a cage of rushes where
near everyone lies sick.
That I’ve a cure for you,
therefore, may seem a trick…
Trust Rosalind it’s not.
Trust ethics to prevail,
and fiefdoms lost to be
restored. Trust that joined hands
will make Arden a stage
where optimism lingers,
once we turn the page.
The above poem derived from ‘King Lear’ is voiced as the actor playing Rosalind might check her interpretation of the character’s movements against the director’s.
After military service, William Conelly took two degrees in English from UC Santa Barbara. Unrelated research and writing work followed before he returned to academia in 2000. Since then he had served in both the US and the UK as an associate professor, tutor and seminar leader in English studies. Retired now, with dual citizenship, he resides with his wife in the West Midlands town of Warwick. In 2015 the Able Muse Press published an assortment of his verse dating back 40 years. It’s titled Uncontested Grounds and may be reviewed at their website or via Amazon.